Starts off good. And then,
0:58 - HOLY SHIIIITTT MY EEAARS AAUGH FAWK WHYYYY DAMN IT
Hav u bin 2 a sit cald utoob?
Nice start. Now go and make the song LOL
Also I didn't hear any dubstep other than a drop with no resolve.
I can dance to this for dayzs
Very energizing. Love the scream fx on the reprises.
Also, our crazy paradise
The melody and flow were very nice and dream-lime. However, my ears almost bled from the high frequencies of that one instrument.
High frequencies have been deleted.
Thanx for the advice^^
Sounded pretty good. I think the reason you got bored of it is the melody line, which seems really drawn out and created on a whim. It echoes the word "whatever" to me, and apparently that's what the whole song ended up sounded like, making you think that it's a song that's whatever and makes it bland to work on. I'd suggest taking greater strides.
The biggest thing that I didn't like about this song was the weird wobbley thing. I couldn't find a bass that sounded right there. I tried a subbass, reese, and then eventually settled on whatever I used is called.
Ow mi eerzs
this is the best
I agree with KennyChu's review
The melody itself is ok, but the instruments are so SLIM it's painful. Any slimmer and this would sound like nails on glass. Please fatten up the instruments before someone dies from listening to this.
I liked the emphasis of the snare.
But then, after 38 seconds, I was like... :O ...then :0 ...then :S ...then :/ ...and then "This needs a tweak"
yea sorry im gonna upload it again
I disagree with Space-Whale.
He wrote those songs. Yes, he can do that.
It lacks variety and the cymbal sound is annoying...I suggest toning that down dramatically and bring out the melody
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